Thursday, March 08, 2007

PLZ SUGGEST A TITLE!!!

Have written a new poem. Can u plz suggest titles for it??? Please post comments for the title... And how'd u like it?

Standing on this bridge to decide my fate,
What’ll be my future? In what’ll I be great?
I’ve to make the choice of my life so soon
Have to choose between my glory and my doom.
Feels like I’m still too young to decide,
There are a million worries, but no one to confide…
Want to make MY choice, but the pressure’s too great,
Everyone’s supportive, but I know it’s just fake.
I just wanna live my life my way,
But all these worries are making it gray!
I’ll have to sacrifice my present for the future
Feel like a lamb about to be sliced by the butcher.
There’s no tenderness in anyone’s eye
No one to hear my helpless sigh….
I want to break free, of the chains that bind me
From all accusations, I’ll have to flee!
I’m no slave; my life is my own,
You think you can control me? Well, you don’t.
The only thing that makes me stagnate is you,
Don’t cage me now, it’s no use.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

gr8 poem........ really realistic....... i sumtimes feels juz like wat has been potrayed........ i think every teenager has or will, at sum point in their lyf, go thru this phase...... called identity crisis........ u hav a talent here... xploit it....... U ROCK GRL

Anonymous said...

May be too late for the post, I stumbled just now. Keep going with ur poetry. Unknown is the name I could think of, never mind. You R beautiful in the pics and looks like u have a beautiful mind too.